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FOR ALL YOU PEOPLE WHO CUT THEMSELVES
written by emilly06:40 PM 2/26/05Al you people out there
who cut themselves without a care
you deserve much much more
in case you haven't noticed life isn't a bore
just open your eyes
look at the world
see its beauty
take my hand
i can show you the path to pure happiness
stop feeling sorry for yourself
be a little optomistic
you are loved
by who you ask?
by me. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by burningup_inside (2-26-2005 - 06:41 PM)
| you don't know many cutters do you? |
by sweetiepie89 (2-26-2005 - 06:42 PM)
| it's harder than it seems to stop cutting ourselfves...but it was really, really good i enjoyed it very much... |
by ForEverLonley (2-26-2005 - 06:49 PM)
| ..whoa..for u who is writing this, it might not sound liek it maters to people, but thank u, it really did help.
ur poems are fucking great, please keep up the good work.
*Renae |
by deadlikeme (2-26-2005 - 06:49 PM)
| open your eyes.....not many people are happy. depression is a sickness adn yes, it is contagious, so dont hold your hand out too long or your gonna get it too |
by CHATTYBIB (2-26-2005 - 07:01 PM)
| if you know what peoples lifes are like there all different... mine isn't borring.... my life is full of pain... i don't feel bad for myself, and yes your poem was very good... but i have to say that some peoples lives are harder than you think... good job tho. |
by CHATTYBIB (2-26-2005 - 07:03 PM)
| P.s Keep trying to help peoples life through poetry cause your great at it. |
by tWiZtIdWiNgZ (2-26-2005 - 07:19 PM)
| This sounds like some religious shit or something. Preaching about how great life is... well it might be for some of you, but there are others who just cant handle things. Everyone is unique, and everyone handles things in different ways. Cutting is apart of your personality. It expresses you, your feelings, and what you're going through. You have no clue what lies deep within the body of a cutter, so dont try to help. |
by (guest) (2-26-2005 - 08:00 PM)
| its great, thanks for helping. |
by (guest) (2-26-2005 - 08:00 PM)
| its great, thanks for helping. |
by VincentValetine77 (2-26-2005 - 08:28 PM)
| its hard not to cutt sometimes it helps other people....but your poem dose lightin spirits so please keep writting |
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