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Randum Feelingz
written by True_Darkness07:30 PM 2/26/05I have this Feeling,
Deep Inside,
Burning Away,
Eating me Alive,
The Feeling Grows,
Everytime your Near,
I doubt ill Survive,
This Feeling thats,
Eating Me Alive, |
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Really short
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Morbid Angel (2-26-2005 - 07:54 PM)
| I've seen too many poems that pretty much go like this for them to really touch me and make me want to read more. Also, correct grammer and spelling will help you to gain more interest for the reader. Good try though. |
by (guest) (2-26-2005 - 08:31 PM)
| I can't count how many times those words have crossed my mind. |
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