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Sucididal tendencies*
written by Trapezium09:19 AM 7/17/04Clutching a razor,
Tight in his hand,
Doing this to himself,
'Cause the pain wont abstand.
Holding his wrist,
It's already slashed,
His world's falling down,
Making a crash.
Through the blanket,
His blood does seep,
Down on his face,
The boy does weep.
Hearing nothing,
But drowning in sound,
Trying to die,
He falls to the ground.
He has failed again,
They wont let him die,
Instead they torment him,
And try to make him cry.
These thoughts are real,
They could come from your freind,
If you dont help them,
Their life may end.
This poem is about,
What i done last night,
Described in detail,
I was such a sight.
I know i am not the only one,
That suffers all of this pain,
Please help all of your freinds,
'Cause they could try again.
Until they try,
You dont realise they mean so much,
Then you sob,
'Cause you could be out of touch,
FOREVER |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Alright guys... please just think about it... be nice to all of your freinds because they could want to die... one more argument with someone close could push them too far... would you want your last words to a freind me nasty? You'd have to live with it all fo your life... just try and remember... These are real feelings from real people... you may say "They don't seem upset" but that's because they put a mask on... they hide it and pretend it's all okay... then when they get home it eats them up inside...... sometimes it could drive them to say goodbye
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Psycho_Penguin (7-17-2004 - 09:44 AM)
| Great poem... Seriously though... If you ever want to vent to someone... I'll listen. |
by Unholy_Blasphemies (7-22-2004 - 08:21 PM)
| woah....... what a great poem!! i like all your poems!! :) |
by Unholy_Blasphemies (7-22-2004 - 08:23 PM)
| woah....... what a great poem!! i like all your poems!! :) |
by SuperBob (7-23-2004 - 03:40 AM)
| HOLY HELL!!! as usual another fantastic poem!!! hell i enjoy all of your poems you have amazing talent!!! keep it up!!!...and i can relate to this poem only too much...more people need to read your footnotes than who actually will |
by XxguitarfreakxX (9-12-2004 - 06:08 PM)
| hey i so dont know if you remember me....but i think you read sum of my poems..ill put them on here..and i love all of your poems...i hope one day im as good as you |
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