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Read Between the Lines
written by wiltedrose01:58 AM 2/27/05Two souls stiched together from the start
But life came along and ripped them apart
The wounds are too deep, no thread to lend
I'm afraid they can't be sewn together again
How did a bond so powerful go to waste?
But these people broke it, filled with such haste
You shredded her innocence, messed with her mind
Ask if we were friends, you'd be surprised what you find
Time for me to leave behind what was mine
She was true friend, if you read between the lines |
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Look what you have done, you ruined it. No comment...
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Dark_Flame (2-27-2005 - 03:40 AM)
| you have no idea how close to home that hits.. |
by Keagan (2-27-2005 - 04:52 AM)
| woah man great poem... and as Dark_Flame said, it hit REALLY close to home |
by Forever Cursed (3-1-2005 - 12:45 PM)
| That poem was very well written and at the same time short, simple and straight to the point. Loved it |
by lost_shadows (3-1-2005 - 02:49 PM)
| *tear* that was beautiful.... |
by AthiestAnarchist (3-3-2005 - 01:19 AM)
| I agree with everyone...that was really good...really really good. |
by excusemecanihavesumpie (3-4-2005 - 12:04 AM)
| great poem, right from the heart. almost as good as my pie song! lol seriously, great poem. |
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