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lucky fanstasy**plz comment**
written by sweetiepie8903:00 AM 2/27/05Take me to a heavenly land,
So I can be with a boy hand and hand
Our feet in the ocean
While watching the motion,
Of the sunseting.
Our lips are pressed together
With the surity of forever,
The power of this feeling,
Mends all the needed healing.
For this is eternity.
We lay beneath the moon,
Accompanied by a soothing tune.
I point out the stars,
And the planets from afar.
I feel the gentle breeze from her mouth.
The feeling of his heart,
Is sweeter that a cherry tart.
For an endless night of passion
A seat belt I must fasten.
For the ice is melting too fast.
For then do I stop
And it raises to the top,
I wake up and realize
Life does minimize,
Your time. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by twzeentch (2-27-2005 - 03:25 AM)
| u did it once again it is so amzing that i like all of ur poems is that i just realize that we write from the same perspective on the kindrid feelings and being free keep them coming |
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