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at first sight (plz comment)
written by teejavus04:52 PM 2/27/05i am sitting here wandering why i miss you so much
why am i thinking about you all the time
all i wanna do is try to figure out what you mean to me
and how i can make you mine
why can't i concentrate , when i wanna work
why can't i sleep , in the night
why did i fell in love with you,
when i didn't believe in love at first sight |
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well its an old one but am just puttin it now
leave comment plz
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| » Comments / Feedback | by darkness_follows_me (2-27-2005 - 04:57 PM)
| thats reli good because its very true |
by smackjunkie91 (2-27-2005 - 05:30 PM)
| luv is blind i try not to fall into its spell luv junkie |
by y2khai (2-27-2005 - 06:13 PM)
by teejavus (2-27-2005 - 06:32 PM)
by (guest) (2-27-2005 - 06:37 PM)
| wat to tell u and wat not imnt sure of it myself all i reember right at this moment is wen we first had a chat ur user name was more than enough 4 me to hav a chat wth u "y do i love her so much" and as far as i remember the very first question i asked u was whom do u love so much but to day im better of askin "y do u love her so much"
at the end all i wanna say is y cry over spilt milk? look forward to go ahead in life and i b'lieve u can do it better than anyone else....
abt ur poem than it is truly awesome
and the rest i feel u can understand dnt really find the necessity to jot it down...
anyway, all the best
ankana |
by teejavus (2-27-2005 - 06:39 PM)
by (guest) (2-27-2005 - 06:48 PM)
| i like this poem a lot this is the one of many that is my most favrite ..... i can tell this poem is written with a lot of heart. ... |
by pain+sex=good (2-28-2005 - 11:51 PM)
by (guest) (3-2-2005 - 11:24 AM)
| beautiful. love readin ur poems--- u know who |
by (guest) (3-4-2005 - 11:44 PM)
| I like it,but its sad at the same time. |
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