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» Poem: --Ignored--
--Ignored--
written by DaMaGeD
07:40 PM 2/27/05
In and out / Up and down
You smile / You frown
You swim / You drown
On this merry-go-round,
Flying / Falling / Crawling
On the ground,
Do you feel all the love,
When you sniff for a buzz?
When you lie for a smile?
When you're crying inside?
Do they know what's on your mind?
In and out / Up and down
You keep on moving,
The rush is soothing,
They dont want you around!!!
You fly / You fall
Always ignored,
You built the walls and locked the door,
Get up / Walk on
Keep going untill you're gone,
You bleed / You heal
Those scars are real,
And they'll never go away,
Like the way you feel today.


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» Comments / Feedback
by resurected (2-27-2005 - 07:42 PM)
your a really talented writer

by (guest) (2-27-2005 - 07:45 PM)
hey this poem's really great! a lot of interesting ideas put into it, but i hope life's actually better for you~peace out

by trilee (2-27-2005 - 07:46 PM)
hey. that was a great poem. thats how i feel al the time. yoiu have a great way of putting words on to paper. if you send me a u2u. we can talk some more. you sound like a kool person. -trilee-

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