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» Poem: --Control--
--Control--
written by DaMaGeD
08:02 PM 2/27/05
The moon,
So far away from the sea,
Controls the tide,
I cant control me,
Cant stop the pain,
Only take it away,
Just for a second...
The on with the day,
It's not a habit, not a routine,
But the only way i can see,
I can control it,
How tightly i hold it,
The only thing thats real...
Cold, hard, shiney steal,
Objects dont kill you,
Feelings do,
Knives can save lives,
This i know is true.


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by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 10:51 PM)
ive nearly read everything uve wrote n u r soo talented n i can relate to almost everything 2...keep it up x x

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