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rAzOrBlAdE cHaIn**comment
written by sweetiepie8911:17 PM 2/27/05I sit twisted
my habits unreal..
The pain inside
something I never wanted to feel..
This razorblade
my best friend..
Always there
to help me mend..
The broken passage way
through the opening of tomorrow..
Through every tear
it leads to a broken scar..
I do not cut
from that of a trend..
That is not the message
I would ever want to send..
I can't be with out my
razor blade so sly...
Won't ask myself any questions
I won't ask myself why..
Why I cut myself
until I can't take no more..
Until my body trembles
and I fall to the floor..
I look toward the crowd
the crowd of my youth...
As their smiles are fake
and the lies are not the truth..
The corruption of the stage
the stage of destruction..
No need to look toward me
no need for reconstruction.
Lead me to the faith
of that of this broken habit of mine..
Look deep into my eyes
tell me I wont be fine..
Lead me to the broken roads
of my broken dreams..
Because nothing is right to me
nothing is where it seems..
As I walk this road
to my world..
Capturing the abyss
and being a little girl..
Keep my razor beside me
for I don't know when I'll feel pain..
Carry it along side me
on my razorblade chain.. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by floggingfelix (2-27-2005 - 11:28 PM)
| luv it man, i really like the end :) |
by silent_tears09 (2-28-2005 - 02:30 AM)
| I love it!....it relates to me in so many ways |
by XsouredXfaithX (2-28-2005 - 08:48 PM)
| that was a really good poem..imma look forward to moer of your poems awesomejob |
by brighteyes1357911 (3-2-2005 - 09:57 AM)
| this is a great poem it relates to many ppl i know me included so i say good job very good! :) |
by darkmaster (3-3-2005 - 10:03 PM)
| vary good! i feel your pain! |
by fallen_&_lost_angel (3-4-2005 - 06:19 PM)
| iu luved it and can totally relate to it... |
by xdanca4eva (3-6-2005 - 01:48 AM)
| I really liked it i can relate to it.... a lot of ppl can |
by JuggaletteTori (3-6-2005 - 05:24 AM)
| hellz yeah that is fuckin kick ass |
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