» Poem: --Alone-- |
--Alone--
written by DaMaGeD12:30 AM 2/28/05It's been so long,
An eternity to me,
And i have been as strong,
As i possibly could be,
But i miss you so much,
In the dark i cry,
And it's hurting my soul,
I'm so sick of the lies,
Alone. I call your name,
In my sleep,
Alone. You are the secret i keep,
From everyone and it's been so long,
I thought i'd get over you,
I was wrong. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by Shadowed_Reflection (2-28-2005 - 12:34 AM)
oh my gosh...this is like something i would write...i am going through something like this too :( |
by Cut_Wrist_Risk (2-28-2005 - 01:30 AM)
Really nice flow and good choice of words!...Try to find a different title though. |
by (guest) (2-28-2005 - 04:47 AM)
not only am i commenting on this poem but all of them i think ur a great poet
i love ur mindset
please email me when ever you think of something new!!!!
sum_41_luver04@yahoo.com
thanks bye |
by (guest) (3-1-2005 - 12:07 AM)
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