| » Poem: scared to bleed but not scared to die |
scared to bleed but not scared to die
written by mohawkkid88802:25 AM 2/28/05shadows of the dark worlds come and surround me
there fingers hit my wrist cuts me to my bone blood falling out.
like a stone on the rode. i breath in and out cant catch my breath i scream in pain but it leaves me all woundup
the funeral was good but i heard people crying i tell them to stop but they just keep on whining i dont understand why this had to happen but i do feel better like a brand new napkin.
so this i tell you im not the one thats dead my body is in pieces and i smell alittle rottin to but after all this shit i figured it out to through the shadows and this life liveing hell pull the triger kid hes the one thats dieing not you its ok to yell |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by aXfireXinside (2-28-2005 - 02:58 AM)
| oh I love it...gives a very realistic approach of what one looking at the funeral may think... |
by floggingfelix (2-28-2005 - 04:02 AM)
| i really luv the end of it man. also like the napkin part, lol :) |
by misled_beauty (3-6-2005 - 02:50 AM)
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