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Goodbye, Just Not Like This
written by utsukushii_jouyouheki05:41 AM 2/28/05You left me,
just like that.
Flashed your smile,
then turned your back.
Why'd you give up?
That's what I don't get.
I know it was hard,
All we had was the internet.
It hurt, I know,
but it was better than being alone.
I thought you wanted this.
I thought you wanted this.
I hope you made the right choice,
because you broke my heart for this.
My thoughts
are caught up in you.
My heart was strong
until I met you.
I don't care that you're leaving,
your heart was decieving.
Lies buried under trust,
you can go, just not like this. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by a_grey_deaths_heart (2-28-2005 - 06:03 AM)
| umm......im speechless....but it was good i admit that.. |
by cglass777 (3-18-2005 - 05:40 AM)
| great job! you have WAY too many poems, soo enjoy the ones I do comment on. |
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