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» Poem: Distant Sky’s .
Distant Sky’s .
written by blackie-hawk
02:29 PM 2/28/05
I can see them laugh in the school.
I can hear their laughter.
But it’s far away.
I can see them talk in the school.
I can hear their conversations.
But it’s far away.
I don’t live anymore.
Not really live.
I can see the sky's move.
Very slow.
Then I think:
Maybe it’s also hurting them.
To move.
Maybe it’s also a pain for them.
To continue.
To move on.
To hold on.
While you hope to get saved.
The saving never comes.
And at last you drown.


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» Comments / Feedback
by AthiestAnarchist (2-28-2005 - 10:55 PM)
wow...I liked this a lot!

by bLoodXkitty (3-1-2005 - 12:07 AM)
I feel the same way.

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