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» Poem: Better(plz comment)
Better(plz comment)
written by dark_child07
04:39 PM 2/28/05
I didnt think he was capable of it,
but now everything is all screwed up,
I guess for him,
its not all about trust.
He is stupid,
he will regret it soon,
he will soon come to realize that,
the best thing he ever had was you.
I am so sorry,
I wish there was something I could do,
to take away the dispair,
to strip this pain from you.
But all I can do is be a friend, just be there,
to stand by your side no matter what,
and show you I care.
He lost the best thing he'll ever have in his entire life,
the day he chose to be a player,
he lost you,
but its ok, you deserve so much better!!!!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Momma!!!! This one is for you about moo-man! Just remember no matter how far apart we are, you are still with me, right here in my heart!!!

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» Comments / Feedback
by darkness_follows_me (2-28-2005 - 05:32 PM)
..enjoyible

by MaterLuna-26 (3-1-2005 - 11:01 PM)
thanks alot lilcorky , and i wish you were here i wuv you lotz daughter moo girl

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