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hope--plz comment
written by teejavus05:16 PM 2/28/05I have a bad hope
to buy some rope
to hang me on the tree
and i'll be free
after i die
my soul will fly
don't know where it will go
cause, the future, i don't know
and in my head
this is what a voice ssaid
"she wasn't the one,
she wasnt the one,
Out there is someone , only for you,
when together, you will be one, and not two." |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by fbomber125 (2-28-2005 - 05:23 PM)
by nailsinmyheart (2-28-2005 - 05:27 PM)
| i like, i like...you should check out some of my stuff if u wanna |
by zver (2-28-2005 - 05:39 PM)
| stop writing poetry and die this poem sucked balls go fucka moose |
by teejavus (2-28-2005 - 05:46 PM)
| thanx zver finally some1 who agrees wid me abt my poems..........lol |
by resurected (2-28-2005 - 06:55 PM)
| zver u suck ass man, its rele good he's a twat or she who cares they suck balls lol its rele good but sad 2 |
by mystic_moon (2-28-2005 - 08:18 PM)
by pain+sex=good (2-28-2005 - 11:52 PM)
| hope is good, hand on to it! |
by teejavus (3-2-2005 - 11:16 AM)
| kool another 1 in top 25 lol |
by smackjunkie91 (3-2-2005 - 10:42 PM)
| i like it i agree with it too theres someone out there for everybody thats y i usually dont stress a break up too much or for too long
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by (guest) (3-3-2005 - 08:29 AM)
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