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Just an Illusion
written by XsouredXfaithX08:43 PM 2/28/05your laying in the sunlught
and for once your heart is filled with delight
you have no tears
your plastic appearence has disappeared
truly happy and not just pretending
you think your sadness is finally ending
a smile on your face
no tears come from your eyes in this place
your not sure where your at but you dont care
you like it here
theres no pain where you are
you have the happiness that once seemed so far
all of a sudden this world starts to shatter
you dont know whats the matter
the happiness is escaping you
and in its place pain comes to
you look at your arm
and coming back are the cuts and scars
the world turns dark as the sun leaves
then you wake up realizing it was all a dream
the pain is back and so are the cuts
the life you want is all an illusion that ends when you wake up |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
....something i dreamed and when i woke up decided to write a poem about it
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| » Comments / Feedback | by _acceptable_loss_ (2-28-2005 - 08:51 PM)
| I once had a dream similar to that . . .good poem |
by crimsonregret (2-28-2005 - 09:12 PM)
| oooo i love this poem , go you! |
by ekibyo_drakmord (3-1-2005 - 11:58 PM)
| awesome poem, loved the detail in it, and when you read it you can understand, even if youve never been throught that , you can feel it in your heart, i dont see why you would ask for some tips from me, that is awesome |
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