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Still I cry
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns
10:26 PM 2/28/05
Still I Cry
And I don't wonder why
Now that you're gone
I sing a sad song
I'm going to have to say
In this poem it hurts anyway
Don't try to cheer me up
No way, No how
I won't get over it
Not here, Not now
Still I Cry, Still I lie
Most of my life I sigh
The depths of my soul
Have already been told
As my life unfolds
It's hard to hold
I'm not okay
And that's what I say...


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by ForEverLonley (2-28-2005 - 10:29 PM)
Amazing, keep it up

by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-28-2005 - 10:36 PM)
Thanks for you in up

by dark_shadow_star_2005 (2-28-2005 - 11:01 PM)
It's a very well made poem good job!

by Bloodfilledcinnabuns (2-28-2005 - 11:23 PM)
Thanks

by whothehellcaresnewayz (3-1-2005 - 06:36 PM)
don't blame yourself.....your not at fault.

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