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» Poem: black
black
written by mohawkkid888
05:23 AM 3/1/05
i couldnt really see what was going on in this hidden place
the bottom was really hard to see it was black as the fur on mice.
man cant see it only i can i am the evil that makes me understand the feeling that you get when your walking all alone at night the dark creeps up on you it might even give you a fright but i wount jump out and take you away i will watch over you if you belive in me today but if you dissagree and dont like what you see i will drop all my keys and leave you here to bleed so think what i tell you but im not here to preech i killed that guy who holds the holy book . if you dont want me to leave just tell me your ok and ill go freely but when ever your in trouble i will be right back anyday . im the darness thats in your shadow and im the black in the sky hell im even the black coffee you drank yesterday.


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its me

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» Comments / Feedback
by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-1-2005 - 05:33 AM)
cool.

by bLoodXkitty (3-3-2005 - 12:52 AM)
I love it. You have talent.

by Punk_Goth_Girl (3-11-2005 - 03:57 AM)
Really good,keep it up.

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