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» Poem: Let me out
Let me out
written by Morning Star
02:38 PM 3/1/05
Let me out of this prison
Dark bars forcing me to stay inside here
Society trapping what I am
Mentality trapping what I want to be
I never asked to be different
Never asked you to be the same
Just wanted to be myself at all times
Inside my mind, the sun fades out
A room with bars and noway out
Never have i been so trapped
Completely wrapped inside something I cannot face
Sorry for all that I am, for what I will become
Please...just let me free


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» Comments / Feedback
by excusemecanihavesumpie (3-7-2005 - 11:08 PM)
great poem - right from the heart

by naughtylilpixie (3-12-2005 - 04:50 PM)
That poem makes my heart sad love.

by Darkness_is_Falling (4-3-2005 - 06:26 AM)
you are a very talented poet. I must admit I am jealous. I can however, really feel the emotion in this poem and I enjoyed it, even though it is a rather dark poem. Good job

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