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» Poem: YOU(it's more interesting than the title
YOU(it's more interesting than the title
written by Bloodfilledcinnabuns
07:44 PM 3/1/05
yesterday was terrible
all day was just unbearable
all because of you
why did you do what you do
last year was so much better
I still see us sitting together
ripped apart did we become
we never got further than hello
you dissappeared
where did you go
ice will melt
pictures fade
all the stars in the milkyway can shine so brightly
but only if you treat them nicely
time has foze
but I still keep moving on
all the green fields wrapped in clover
hey boy
why don't you come over
this year is getting better
suck in the tears
make the sadness dissappear
if we look forward to tomorrow
a dream is all we'll ever have to borrow
bury and let it lay down its scrawny head
let sleep and go to bed
of all that happens in my head
thoughts of you are what I dread
but then
why are the so wonderful?


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by XsouredXfaithX (3-1-2005 - 08:05 PM)
lol you were right it was more interestin than the title...good job !

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