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Broken beater
written by lone-poet09:34 PM 3/1/05He tries to knock her to the ground
A spasm of pain ripples through her soul
She tries not to make a sound
As she falls to the floor, conscience swallowed whole
He clenches his fist to strike again
That’s when she goes insane |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wrote this after my friend was phisicaly abused by her father .... it took me bout 20seconds and it was on paper.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by bitter_beauty_of_death (3-1-2005 - 09:50 PM)
| I understand why you wrote this. I've had friends who were abused too. |
by (guest) (3-1-2005 - 09:51 PM)
| All i have to say is weird! |
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