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» Poem: But Goodbye
But Goodbye
written by lpcrawlinggrl
11:59 PM 3/1/05
What is there to say
On this day
But goodbye

What can I say
To someone in my way
But move

You're just standing here
Not really blocking me from there
But why

Why do you pretend to care
You said all was fair
But no

You say I lie too much
And you lie with much more shit
But cry

You've pretended for too long
Ignored my right and noticed my wrong
But how

How can you pretend so well
And you never been better still
But then

You say something to upset me
Then ignore my appology
But now

I hate you but I'm afraid
To hurt you and nothing said
But goodbye

Let me go already leave me here
Where I can make my own answers clear
But move

Out of the way and let me walk
I'll leave you there to talk
But why

Why did you say you cared at all
And you're still letting me fall
But no

You change your mind again
And you still pretend
But cry

Cry for me and I won't notice
Death has already set my focus
But how

How have you been so sure
Forgetting me will be my cure
But then

Again you change your mind
I've had it I'll leave you behind
But now

I know what I think of you
And nothing to say to you
But goodbye


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
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Thanks for pretending to care... All you did was procrastinate my suicide, and now I know you no longer can hide you hate me. When will I say goodbye? As soon as I realize one person left isn't enough...

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by red_rosebuds_2006 (3-2-2005 - 05:20 PM)
i feel the same way but you always have to remember that there is someone out there.

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