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» Poem: suicide note**plz comment**
suicide note**plz comment**
written by sweetiepie89
01:18 AM 3/2/05
Sorry! For all i've done,
I won't get in your way.
and by the time you read this,
On my death bed i'll lay.

I'm worthless and lonely,
So i think this is for the best.
I needed to kill myself,
and put myself at rest.

Not like anyone will care,
Or anyone will bother.
I was just a silly kid,
who was hated by his mother.

I do not want a funeral,
Don't go the expense.
Just chuck me away in the rubbish,
You know that it makes sense.

Give all my stuff to the poor,
and burn all the pictures of me.
I don't want anyone to know,
That i've been so cowardly.


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» Comments / Feedback
by ForsakenDream (3-2-2005 - 02:26 AM)
wow!! I mean im not all for the suicide thing, but this was really good!! nice job!

by ForsakenDream (3-2-2005 - 02:28 AM)
I liked it!, Not all about the suicide thing, but this was pretty good! Nice Job!!

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