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hidden by fears**plz comment**
written by sweetiepie89
02:50 AM 3/2/05
Craving pain,
Wanting more.
Feeling nothing,
As I hit the floor.

Killing everything,
Every bit of me.
All because,
you didn't see.

Final tear,
Down my cheek.
My end is near,
It seems so bleak.

The hidden pain,
Bleeding from my wrists.
I close my eyes,
I clench my fists.

Waiting for someone,
To call my name.
To save my life,
To stop the pain.

Holding my last breathe,
I don't want to waste.
The blood on my wrist,
The tears I can taste.

The taste lingers in my mouth,
And these words roll off my lips.
You never knew what would happen,
If I let the blade slip

Look at me now,
And you might find.
All the things,
I left behind.

My blackened heart,
My reddened tears.
Changed through pain,
And hidden by fears.


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-2-2005 - 02:52 AM)
damn .............. there are just no words i loved it thanks for sharin

by (guest) (3-2-2005 - 02:52 AM)
damn .............. there are just no words i loved it thanks for sharin

by (guest) (3-2-2005 - 02:55 AM)
that was.....awesome

by black_wolf (3-2-2005 - 03:05 AM)
hmmm. Its understandable by a lot of us.

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