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Nature felt my pain today..plz comment
written by sweetiepie8903:05 AM 3/2/05The sky began to cry today
For once it felt my pain
Finally god answered my prayers
And he ordered it to rain
The rocks began to break today
Because inside they were so hurt
Feelings they kept for so many years
Collected with the dirt
The ocean became very rough today
It crashed its gentle waves
Causing all ships to be lost at sea
Because that's the role it plays
The flowers began to die today
No part of them did bloom
Because they lost their water for so long
They were entitled to their doom
The moon did not come out today
The night was dark and dim
The world was scared and lonely
All this because of him
The trees began to weep today
They let down all their leaves
Because winter has blown them down
They were dancing in the breeze
The Stars shown no light today
They didn't here my deadly plea
And they didn't guide anyone that night
Not even the ships at sea
The sun lost all its rays today
And it didn't look so gold
Because it wasn't warm enough
The day wasn't as bold
The animals began to run away
And the clouds started to part
Every bit of nature felt my pain
Because I had a broken heart |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by xXxGoNexXxInSaNexXx (3-2-2005 - 03:08 AM)
| that is good i love how poems ryme amd you did a hella good ass job |
by raw_silence420 (3-2-2005 - 03:09 AM)
| wow, i simply love this one. i love the way it rhymed, i loved the word usage, i loved every fucking bit. perfection. keep it up.
-raw |
by Thelilone (3-2-2005 - 04:08 AM)
| I LOve it and the title caught my attention! I think you are a good writer and am thankful i had the pleasure of reading your poem today!! |
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