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» Poem: Fear*comments plz*
Fear*comments plz*
written by xMaskOfHappinessx
04:16 AM 3/2/05
REACH OUT-It's a frozen heart, the beating stopped forever.

OPEN YOUR EARS-It's the thunder booming outside your bedroom window, waiting to consume you.

STARE AT IT-It's the small boat caught in the eye of the storm.

SMELL IT-It's the musty, menacing basement at the pit of the creaky mansion

MAKES YOU FEEL-Like you are suspended in the air, just waiting for the endless fall.


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» Comments / Feedback
by wjnSugar (3-2-2005 - 04:29 AM)
your very original

by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-2-2005 - 05:18 AM)
Sensory poems are good.

by Tainted_Lover (3-3-2005 - 04:18 AM)
Wow, thats probly the best poem i've read so far...Great job..very original.. ~*Anna*~ o.O

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