» Poem: Fear*comments plz* |
Fear*comments plz*
written by xMaskOfHappinessx04:16 AM 3/2/05REACH OUT-It's a frozen heart, the beating stopped forever.
OPEN YOUR EARS-It's the thunder booming outside your bedroom window, waiting to consume you.
STARE AT IT-It's the small boat caught in the eye of the storm.
SMELL IT-It's the musty, menacing basement at the pit of the creaky mansion
MAKES YOU FEEL-Like you are suspended in the air, just waiting for the endless fall. |
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» Comments / Feedback | by wjnSugar (3-2-2005 - 04:29 AM)
by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-2-2005 - 05:18 AM)
by Tainted_Lover (3-3-2005 - 04:18 AM)
Wow, thats probly the best poem i've read so far...Great job..very original..
~*Anna*~ o.O
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