| » Poem: Here's a girl . |
Here's a girl .
written by blackie-hawk01:51 PM 3/2/05She used to be popular .
- At least a little .
She failed .
Like many others .
And she fell .
She gave a damn about everyone .
She didnt care .
She didnt went to school .
And that did she .
Without parent permission .
She lost .
She turned her back on everything .
Now she's fine again .
Almost .
Except from that hole inside .
That's getting bigger .
But now she's got no one .
And she's all alone .
She's falling deeper .
Into herself .
Into the safe .
Of loneliness .
That girl .
Is me . |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Jimmy_Jam (3-2-2005 - 01:58 PM)
| ur poem speaks to me I like it
Keep writing stuff- i can relate to the poem |
by thebrokenone (3-2-2005 - 02:03 PM)
| "She didnt went to school .
And that did she .
Without parent permission . " that part doesn't make sense, either mispelled words somewhere, or you just can't say what you want. |
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