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» Poem: We're Apart
We're Apart
written by HitomiCherub
12:01 AM 3/3/05
We were friends
We were lovers
I trusted you
You trusted me
And now we're apart
You are still on my mind,
Like you were before
I gave everything for you
Hoping all I could get in return
Is your love
You gave gifts,
You said words
And now we're apart
I watched you go,
With a slight smile on my face
But is that smile true?
My heart says no
I sit in my classes, at school,
With the appearance of happiness, and optimism,
But when I'm at home,
I feel the pain you left on my heart
I can no longer feel the happiness
That I felt with you
Because we are apart


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I wrote this in my English class when I found my fiance cheating on me

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» Comments / Feedback
by Deadly_Rose (3-3-2005 - 12:40 AM)
That's pretty. I'm sorry you are in pain

by (guest) (3-4-2005 - 11:29 PM)
excellent. i know how that feels.

by intheblinkofaneye (3-7-2005 - 12:23 AM)
Gawd, it's so amazing... Don't worry. You're not alone in the feeling, my friend. I hope you find good happiness in the end. Just know I never did, though you can be the one to do so. Later. |In the Darkness Forever| *~*~*Samwise*~*~*

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