| » Poem: Betrayal Of the Worst (comments?) |
Betrayal Of the Worst (comments?)
written by XsouredXfaithX01:18 AM 3/3/05im sick and tired of all your lies
the many nights i laid there and cried
all because of you and your ways
the things you did to me day after day
you used me for sex then cheated on me
then you asked me to lie so that the world wouldnt see
you tried to bring me down to your level of low
and got pissed when i refused and said no
all you wanted was a fling
you didnt want the love i could bring
all you wanted was a quick screw
so i decided to say " fu** you!"
i should have known from the begining
your horrible ways of living
asking me to lie so that you wouldnt get caught
so that your good boy appearence could be bought
all i have to say to you is learn the right way to live
and stop asking people to cover up your sins |
All (c)Copyrights reserved by the Original Author.
Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this was about a friend of mine and what happened with this guy she met at a party
(by the way he was hot lol)
comments?
[ View XsouredXfaithX's Profile ] [ Go to the Poetry Portal ]
This Poem has been viewed 86 times
|
|
| » Comments / Feedback | by smackjunkie91 (3-3-2005 - 01:24 AM)
| lol about the hot part most of the guys in this world arent worth a girls time anyways tho |
by xwhatitis2burn8x (3-3-2005 - 01:53 AM)
| the raw emotion in the poem was good. too many coomon rhymes tho. dont be afraid to take a chance. try to change it up use different words to rhyme with, not the same ones everyone else uses. make your poetry more unique and complex |
|
|
|
|
