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Paperdoll (better than the title infers)
written by XsouredXfaithX01:54 AM 3/3/05theres a girl that walks this world
her hairs is stright, it has no curl
she tends to rip easily so she stays far from all
because she is everyones little paperdoll
they use her to express themselves with
people hurt her easily with just a slight rip
she burns with even the littlest flame
and in everyones eyes , she is to blame
she doesnt understand why they do this
why they take out there anger on her when they're pissed
shes just a little paperdoll there for their use
there for them to ridicule and abuse
her paper is starting to get more wrinkled as time goes by
these people are the reason why
one day her paper will rip in half
these people wont care, theyll just sit and laugh
little will they know that on that day she'll leave
she wont be there for them to oversee
shell finally be free from them all
shell no longer be their little paperdoll |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i was reading the poems on the poetry portal page and i was noticing some really good poems coming from this poet with the name paperdoll..and that sort of inspired me to write this poem from my point of view and i guess i want to say thank you to that person!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by vicious_cutter (3-3-2005 - 01:58 AM)
| very good, a lot of feeling. i like it. |
by *BrokenDreams89* (3-3-2005 - 01:58 AM)
| awww....im going to cry.....i like it a lot |
by TearsOfBetrayal (3-3-2005 - 02:00 AM)
| I really loved it!I thought it was great how you compared the two, really cool idea. Very original, loved it keep writing please!!! |
by XpaperdollX (3-3-2005 - 02:04 AM)
| I really loved it, It describes me so well. I honestly cried. Even if it wasn't about me it would still be an amzing poem. Thank you very much. You are also an amazing writer keep up the great work!! P.S so odd how you descirbed me so well. |
by xwhatitis2burn8x (3-3-2005 - 02:14 AM)
| i love it. well written. some of the lines a lil too common as fasr as like the rhyme you used but other than that great job |
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