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» Poem: why the lies???**plz comment**
why the lies???**plz comment**
written by sweetiepie89
02:29 AM 3/3/05
I Don't Know how to explain
how i feel right now
hurt,betrayed,lied to,im nothing
those are only a couple of my feelings
why the hell did u do that?!?
are you that dumb? i wanst over
you then, but you can be for sure
that i neva wanna speak to you again!
dumb me believed you!
all those lies you told me
why? whad i do to you?
you told me you liked me n u wanted
to be together one day soon! BULL SHIT!
you said the reason we wernt together
yet was"you didnt have the time"!
BULL why did you lie to me?
I wanna know so i dont make
the mistake of wasting my time w/a guy like
you AGAIN! my parents warned me!
did i listen? NO! i was dumb!
I wish I NEVA met you! I wish
I neva had your friendship! maybe
I wouldnt be so hurt right now!
You picked one of the worst times
in my life to pull this shit w/me!
THANX i appreciate it so freakin much!
why me? like whyd you pick me to
lie to? to treat me SO well n in the end ruin it?!?
was it cause you thought id be
an easy target? just casue I ain't
very pretty n skinny doesnt give you
the right to treat me like a freakin
ragdoll n throw my feelings around like
you did! i stuck up for you when others didnt!
n this is how you repay me? I tried to be
there for you when you needed me the most!
I guess it doesnt matter! it was all a waste of time!
I thought you were different!
i guess i was wrong again! i just wish
i was numb to all the pain right now!
it hurts so much! when will it go away?
you aren't worth the tears i shed but
i can't stop them...why? i wish i knew!
i guess i thought "for once in my life
a guy likes me for me!" well thats what i
wouldve thought until now!
i feel like the gurls in the movies who get betted on!
which i wouldnt put it past you! but this
lil story will NOT have a happy ending...
where the guy gets the gurl! you already ruined it!
and now its done, its over, im through with you!
so have a great life! BYE!


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» Comments / Feedback
by xwhatitis2burn8x (3-3-2005 - 02:38 AM)
hmmm. could be cleaned up a bit after youve calmed down. its like one of those peoms we write rite after something happens where we're still freaking out and just writing down whats on our mind and in our heart. i think that in a couple days if you like it over and edit it you'll have something really great.

by volcom2793 (3-3-2005 - 04:42 AM)
Great poem! I hope the guys that treated u like that pays for his actions. E-mail me at volcom2793@aol.com or u can instant message me!

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