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Life is like this, get over it
written by perfect.flaws02:43 AM 3/3/05You fall and scrape you knee
but you get up again.
Yet your still in fear that you'll fall once more.
Of course you'll fall again, we always do.
Yet again you get right back up.
Life is like this, and thats how it goes.
People may hate you.
But you still live you life.
Even more people hate you,
but you still keep on living.
It hurts you to hear those aweful names.
But don't even try to tell me you don't do the same.
You make up names, and whisper to your friends,
you whisper to yourself, about those who you hate.
You hate people just the same as they hate you.
Life doesn't always go your fucking way.
People like you, and people hate you.
You still keep on living.
You Fall down and leave without that scratch.
You Fall down and scrape your knee
but everytime you get back up.
Don't go kill yourself, because a few months, maybe even years, arent going your way.
Life is like this, so get over it. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by psychopathicmonkey (3-3-2005 - 02:47 AM)
by starten (3-3-2005 - 02:56 AM)
| Well said. I'm somewhat sick of all the suicidal fruitcakes on this site |
by XsouredXfaithX (3-3-2005 - 03:20 AM)
| it is a very well written and very outspoken poem...but as a writer you need to learn about the other persons point of view..i have thought about suicide..but you fail to look at the deeper problems a person may have..for me it was abusize parents(mental and physical) ..constant ridicule from people..pressure..suicidal sister..just a lot of things but if your going to write a poem like that you might not want to seem as if you are attacking someone for being the way they are..people commit suicide all the time and it is because they do not do well with pain |
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