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A Cutter Found Out ((comments?))
written by XsouredXfaithX02:57 AM 3/3/05people sitting...people staring
never a smile, they're always glaring
after seeing the scars, i am now feared
fate swung its head back and reared
laughing at me, thinking it'd be funny for the world to know
not knowing the pain i try not to show
around the school the rumors quickly spread
how i cut and how i longed to be dead
they never asked me so that u could explain
to tell them its how i supress my pain
they wanted gossip, they didnt care
now im sitting in the counselers chair
he wants me to talk and to express myself
for me to let it all out
all this because someone had to go tell
they have now made my life more of a living hell |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i have a friend who the school found out she cuts after she over dosed of pills and thi is how they treat her and i think it is really pathetic of them to do this
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Forever Cursed (3-3-2005 - 03:10 AM)
| A emotional and well written poem. Well done. |
by xMaskOfHappinessx (3-3-2005 - 03:12 AM)
| I agree with your footnote. Todays gossip in school is outrageous. People will make up a load of crap just to get a, "OHMYGOSH HOW DID YOU FIND THAT OUT?!?" |
by XpaperdollX (3-3-2005 - 03:53 AM)
| good job. I really liked it it's very true |
by xwhatitis2burn8x (3-18-2005 - 09:58 PM)
| i like this one much better than the others. the ending could be worded a lil better but other than that good job. |
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