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» Poem: Can I Borrow Some Ambition?
Can I Borrow Some Ambition?
written by anotefromacutter
06:16 AM 3/3/05
The way things are going,
I dont think Im going to be able to make it.
You can absorb it all, and slowly take it.

The way things are going,
You dont think I can be me,
put an end to my suffering, slowly.

The way things are going,
you can blow my head off,
and Ill survive to prove Im enough.

The way things are going,
it seems to all fall down,
all of the bodies, just hanging around.

The way things are going,
its so hard not to be like you,
I need to get by, and do what I need to do.

The way things are going,
it seems like you've given up hope on me,
put an end to my suffering, very slowly.

The way things are going,
its like a summer sprayed with blood,
but without the people telling me I could.

The way things are going,
the hate blinds the truth,
and the pain is worse than pulling a tooth, by hand.

The way things are going,
I contemplate suicide,
leave me alone, and allow me to die....


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» Comments / Feedback
by (guest) (3-3-2005 - 07:57 AM)
why don't you borrow some SHUT THE HELL UP.

by anotefromacutter (3-3-2005 - 01:36 PM)
using a-class moronic insults to make u look kool, eh?

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