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My thoughts.
written by JuhyouXKaze1506:58 AM 3/3/05You walk away.
Its like somethings wrong.
It seems to me somethings going on.
I sit here in deathly quiet.
And know your not there.
I don`t feel you in my heart.
This is only the start.
Its like the beginning is`t ending.
This can`t be right.
This can`t be true.
Am I really hating you? |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by JuhyouXKaze15 (3-3-2005 - 07:07 AM)
| Hey can anybody tell me how to see my comments? If you can e mail me at FireKitsune16@yahoo.com thx guys!! |
by GeishaGirl (3-3-2005 - 07:18 AM)
| Yup. That wasn't too bad. |
by Forever Cursed (3-3-2005 - 12:07 PM)
| That was pretty good, although using spell check might make it a little more effective. |
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