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» Poem: Bitter Fucking Pills.
Bitter Fucking Pills.
written by Josh_x
11:17 AM 3/3/05
Silent screaming
Inside of my head
The voices told me to die
While they laughed hysterically
Phychiatrists tell me i'm crazy
They give me more pills
Bitter fucking pills
They say they should make me feel good
What the fuck would they know
Why the fuck would they care?
All i want is for the voices to go away
Or maybe i don't
I never know
They kept me company
When noone else was there
Every night i try to sleep
But i cannot because the screaming gets so loud
I shove the pills into my mouth
Forgetting how many i took
Feeling a little faint
The room begins to shake
Everything seems a blur
Falling to the floor
The sound of my body hitting the ground
Its music to my ears
My eyes quickly fluttered shut
Say goodbye to the voices
Say goodbye to my life.


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» Comments / Feedback
by eyes_of_misery666 (3-3-2005 - 01:42 PM)
It's good, but personally I prefer old english type of stuff, but its still good.

by xloneyxheartx (3-3-2005 - 03:33 PM)
Very Good Poem..

by blackie-hawk (3-3-2005 - 04:14 PM)
If this (exept the last part) is written from own personal experiences, then I can fully understand, 'cause I feel the same. Erhm, I just don't know what to write, I'm stummed. Love the poem, in case you haven't figured. It's so good, so perfect written.

by trilee (3-3-2005 - 04:53 PM)
hey. nice they just keep gatting beter. i love it. it reminds me when i was gone.

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