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The Otherside of "Me" *please comment*
written by ForsakenDream09:02 PM 3/3/05I feel the scars that still bleed,
The fear that burns within me.
I dont know who I really am,
Do you know me?
Or do you care.
Followed your so called dreams,
Left in the shadows,
This so called "me."
I dont feel the same,
Somthing is different,
Im not just having a bad day.
Feed the flames,
I know it burns,
But sometimes it kills the pain.
Why is everyone looking at me,
What have I done this time?
Besides kill who I used to be,
The otherside of "me". |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by trulybroken57 (3-3-2005 - 09:17 PM)
by Emo-Child (3-3-2005 - 10:48 PM)
| This is amazing, have u read my stuff, although it has nothin on this i wondered wat u think of mine. |
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