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» Poem: The hand i was dealt.
The hand i was dealt.
written by perfect.flaws
10:24 PM 3/3/05
All this time, I've been on this line
of i love you, i love you not.
I contemplated for so very long.
Then I called you up,
Hearing that voice,
hearing your words,
you made me realize
there's no need to comprimise
on this line
of i love you, i love you not.
You came out and said it,
hesitation not a bit.
The hand that i was dealt,
was what made me melt,
for All this time, you'd felt-
the same.
Never have i been treated
like such a perfect princess-
is how you thought of me.
In words i can't describe,
is how you made me feel,
with just one word, you managed to steal-
my broken heart, and mend it into full.
Perfect was your kiss,
and you I'll always miss.
Until that day I'm back,
in your soft iron arms.
The hand that i was dealt,
just made me melt-
inside and out,
because what i was dealt
was you.
Everyday i've wondered
what it is you see
in me, thats so great
you'd choose me.
Just the same as you've often
pondered why it's you i've picked.
I guess we'll never know,
but it's just the hand we were dealt.


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
I don't usually write "lovey" poems,so it's probably not that great. haha, but ive had these feelings, and no way to express them, so here they are! :)

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