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» Poem: curse
curse
written by mohawkkid888
04:31 AM 3/4/05
bleed with no worry cause its on the in side
know you cant hurt me cause it wount give up my pride
ill drope you with one hit and ill start laughing
what do you think of me now BITCH cause your the one laying

your blood on my fist dont really care l smear it on you and tear off your ear
your roting right now you dont smell to good

the cealing is caving in its getting to close
need to get air but can hardly get loose
im screaming so loud no one can hear me
but deep on the inside im saying beat me up scotty


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» Comments / Feedback
by Tel (3-4-2005 - 04:35 AM)
interesting! i loved the first part best. u should email me west_cali_gurl_14@yahoo.com

by xxxxxxblackdragonxxxxxx (3-4-2005 - 04:50 AM)
(cackles insanely) fun poem, me like...

by Angel_in_Hellx23 (3-4-2005 - 08:08 AM)
i like that lol. It was different from the same ol' poems now a days. keep it up. email me Lovelyad23@hotmail.com

by wednesday (3-5-2005 - 02:37 AM)
that was a kool poem.

by Punk_Goth_Girl (3-11-2005 - 04:01 AM)
I love it!Funny but still not too much where you don't see the mean.Great work.

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