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» Poem: when sorry is not enough
when sorry is not enough
written by vanhelsinggreyfaerie
05:17 PM 3/4/05
You give me all your problems
you don't even care
that when you give me a problem
it hurts me inside I just want to run and hide
screaming in the inside you apoligize everybody
but everyday you do the same don't you know you're making me insane? but yet you say nobody cares but I am right before your eyes but you're hurting me inside so what do you expect when I don't believe you


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
this is to a friend that tells me all thier problems.

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by perfect.flaws (3-4-2005 - 05:32 PM)
really good poem. i have a friend just like that, i know what it's like. good job.

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