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» Poem: Let Me Go..
Let Me Go..
written by perfect.flaws
06:00 PM 3/4/05
You told me you'd treat me right,

Every night you held me tight,

How could i be so decieved

why did i believe

that maybe you ment what your lips said.

down this black hole is where i was lead.

Why did i let you in,

you've left me as one empty tin.

But now it kills me to hear you say

how much you miss me,

im sorry but your words are just betray.

Why did i let you do this to me,

Why don't you let me be..

After all it's you that let me go.

Why didn't i say no

when you asked to be with me.

i guess it's all too late, to think about the past.

I'm sorry it had to be this way,

but it's you that let me go,

so do it, and just let me go.


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by Deleterious132x (3-4-2005 - 06:09 PM)
Hey thanks for the comment, i love your poems also

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