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Feeding The Addiction_Comments Please.
written by Sugar_N_Spikes07:20 PM 3/4/05Feeding the Addiction
Pill-popping cheerleader, in her perfect little world
Daddy’s little angel, the church going girl
But she’s got a secret, a nasty little thrill
And into her perfect world, this secret will spill.
She’s gunna get hooked, gunna get fucked
Standing on the corner like a five-dollar slut
Selling her body, selling her soul
Feeding the addiction
Shooting up in the bathroom of her mansion
Needle and spoon, she’s got tracks in her arms
What would daddy say about the prize-winning fool?
Look at the beauty queen, who ruled her school.
She’s gunna get hooked, gunna get fucked
Standing on the corner like a five-dollar slut
Selling her body, selling her soul
Feeding the addiction
But one day she took so much, she OD’d
And the world found out her secret
She had it all, she had everything
But fucked up, fucking with Heroin
She’s gunna get hooked, gunna get fucked
Standing on the corner like a five-dollar slut
Selling her body, selling her soul
Feeding the addiction
She’s gunna get hooked, gunna get fucked
Standing on the corner like a five-dollar slut
Selling her body, selling her soul
Feeding the addiction
Feeding the addiction
Feeding the addiction
Feeding the addiction
Feeding the addiction
Feeding the addiction
She’s Feeding the addiction |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
This is Lyrics to one of Necropolis's ("My" Band)
Song's wriiten by me,Intresting to see what ppl think.
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| » Comments / Feedback | by The Pope (Clayton) (3-4-2005 - 07:22 PM)
| its pretty good overall, you need more versus. |
by Sugar_N_Spikes (3-4-2005 - 07:24 PM)
| It works with the music ammont of verses but thanks for the comment :) |
by candycanemain (3-4-2005 - 08:27 PM)
by samwize (3-5-2005 - 11:25 PM)
| nice!! wud be an awsome metal song |
by Tsuihousha (3-15-2005 - 01:59 PM)
| Good, but I'd really need to hear the music to say if it's a good song or not. |
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