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--This Is Goodbye--
written by DaMaGeD10:20 PM 3/4/05In the darkest moment of my day i
Leave you because i cannot stay,
On the blackest night, i can see
Verbal assault will not help me,
Every day another fight,
You will never get it right,
Only death will see me cry,
Understand, this is goodbye. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by hortence (3-5-2005 - 07:02 PM)
| wow thats good and wow u sound a nice person :) |
by (guest) (3-6-2005 - 10:07 PM)
| i love all ur poems-n can relate to most of em x |
by (guest) (3-16-2005 - 11:18 PM)
| I definitely get what your saying here. I write the same kind of depressing poetry, myself, and often get compliments on it and other times I'm criticized for my pessimism. I think it's great that you put it all out there... X3 |
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