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I HATE YOU! (plz comment)
written by sk8rchik12:55 AM 3/5/05I know what your problem is
your a cold hearted bitch
whenever i see or hear you
i'm angry and my eyes begins to twitch.
I cant stand what you did
and i will always hate you for it
if i could i'd put you in front if a car
then turn the key and floor it.
What you did was evil
What's worse is that you know
You stole the man i love
your nothing but a dirty hoe.
First i'd slit ur throat
and make you taste your blood,
then i'd cut off your whole head
and let it hit the floor with a thud.
Or i would stab you
until your body would never heal
then i'd whisper in your ear
"This is the pain you made me feel.
You made him break up with me,
now listen this is the deal."
then she would stare in my eyes
as she breathed her final breath
"your gonna say hi to Satan for me"
then i'd stab her in the chest.
This is what i would do
if i ever had the chance
all because she asked my boyfriend
"hey hottie wanna dance?" |
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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
yes i know...i'm evil...if you dont like it then ur prolly the bitch i'd kill so u can kiss my ass....plz comment
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| » Comments / Feedback | by forever_lost_in_me (3-5-2005 - 01:25 AM)
| kickass poem!!
it kinda describes my best friend and her x boyfriend.
i really like it.
and i still want to kill the bitch that my x is going out with.........
keep writin.
rock on!!
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by neverhappy1184 (3-5-2005 - 01:31 AM)
| I love this poem!!!Check out my stuff sometime |
by (guest) (3-5-2005 - 02:23 AM)
| I Really Like It Its Just Like This girl I Know Megan But She Stole The Guy That SAid HE Would Go Out With ME not HER She Lied To Him Saying I Asked Another Guy out Shes So Selfish And Desprate Ugh..I HATE HER but yeah..good poem keep writing... |
by Tel (3-5-2005 - 02:38 AM)
| yup yup.... going threw the same thing here... ive gotta lotta good stuff u ought 2 check out. love ur poem... west_cali_gurl_14@yahoo.com |
by xXxGoNexXxInSaNexXx (3-5-2005 - 03:32 AM)
| hey that was so beautiful i love crazy ass poems like that did that really happen? |
by sk8rchik (3-5-2005 - 03:55 AM)
| no..not the killing part newayz, there was a girl who stole my b/f....and it was my best friend...l8r he said he made a mistake and asked me back out but i didnt go out with him cuz i realized he as an asshole |
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