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Shadows
written by Whisperthewind01:33 AM 3/5/05An unnoticed idedntity clouded,
restless beneath your feet
sorrow life years buried in dirt
billions of cares unforgiven.
Scar a lifeline on granite stone
living wasted nothings
These unspoken distant calls repel,
Dying seeds of hateful notes
Using nitrous pins to expose
this evil flesh inside
revealing impure fagile wings
that can't ever be hidden
Yourself seen toward judgement
flowing an ocean of tears seeping
downwards to Hell. |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by Darkwolfgirl (3-5-2005 - 01:51 AM)
| oooo impure fragile wings. i love that line. very creative, very interesting. all in all a very good poem. |
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