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Just a poem(please comment)
written by geminichik71104:51 AM 3/5/05It’s all weighing down so heavily
Everything I do, everything I see
There’s more bad then good in my life
I could end it with one little knife
I feel myself start to slip
And then reality loses grip
I find myself here on the floor
Turn out the lights, and lock the door |
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| » Comments / Feedback | by The Pope (Clayton) (3-5-2005 - 05:27 AM)
| nice, short, and ends with a snap.
I like it. |
by (guest) (3-5-2005 - 05:50 AM)
| well that was sad she suicide right well i never would do that but thats still a good poem |
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