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For english class(please comment)
written by geminichik71104:54 AM 3/5/05Here I sit, and it’s only me
The whole world is out having fun
The pressure and fear weight me down a ton
So, I sit home alone, and stare at the TV
If only my loneliness with something they could see
It feels like I’ve sat alone for days, without ever seeing the sun
I think about the nothingness my life has become, and all the little thing I thing I should have done
To happiness, I will never find the key
It seems today, my heart is cold
I want to curl up and hid in my own little nook
How could my life have sunk this low
So many words were said; so many eyes were rolled
In my head, I wish they could look
Only then could they see what was going on; only then could they ever know |
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It HAD to be a sonnet!
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| » Comments / Feedback | by fallen_&_lost_angel (3-9-2005 - 01:21 AM)
| that's not even a sonnet form |
by tha3y3_dye (3-9-2005 - 10:21 AM)
| why yes you need to place it in this style the conflict is presented within three quatrains (four lines) of verse, and resolved in a final couplet. The Shakespearean format is "a-b-a-b/c-d-c-d/e-f-e-f/g-g." |
by Drmsr_XXIII (3-14-2005 - 05:03 PM)
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You know what, it does not mater whether that work is not in sonnet form or what ever you call that. Everyone has their own style. of writing. Why don't you guys check mine out?
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