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Pretend(please comment)
written by geminichik711
04:55 AM 3/5/05
You’re not my friend
You only pretend
In public you ignore me
In private you adore me
I wish you wouldn’t act like that
It makes me want to beat you with a ****ing bat
We have such meaningful conversations, when no ones around
But in public, when you see me, your eyes turn to the ground
I miss the days when things like this didn’t matter
Where you would have still been they’re for me, we could go on in mindless chatter
You’re the only one who could ever understand
Of all the millions of people in this land
I knew that was true almost from the first day I knew you
We are so much alike; don’t pretend that you don’t know that it’s true
We used to stay online, talking for hours
Only leave for food, or the bathroom, or quick showers
Now that’s gone, and you care about me no more
Sometimes when I think about it, I just sit and cry on the floor
There is a message I would like to send:
I miss you
And that’s the end


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
Again, for english, and it HAD to be a certaint way... I just put my own spin on it...

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