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» Poem: Not over You Yet!!!
Not over You Yet!!!
written by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl
11:19 AM 3/5/05
After we broke up
You were all I thought about
I felt so broken and empty inside
The thought of suicide
Often came to mind
But I made a promise that
I'm going to keep no matter what
So I hid the way I feel from the world
Acted like I was fine
I put on a great big smile
But when I got home
All I did was cry
I wanted you back
But I couldn't take you back
B/c of what you did
I even started dating again
But no one could take
Your place in my heart
No one could make me
Feel the way you did
No matter how hard I tried
I couldn't get over you
But I told everyone that I was
Only a few people know
How I feel when it comes to you
Which is I love you
I don't want to get over you
I want to hold your hand
I want you to embrace me
But you wouldn't come near
If you knew I wouldn't be some where
I know I broke your Heart
But you broke mine first
But that is in the past now
Now all I can say is
I'm not over you yet
And I don't want want to be
I still love you
And I want you back
Now that you Know
Are you going to take me back
Or leave me here to suffer
Some more before you decide?


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
i wrote this for my ex (andrew) even tho he made me go through a living hell after we broke up and i still loved/love him i feel stupid to say that but it is true.... comments anyone

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» Comments / Feedback
by heartbrokenbabii (3-5-2005 - 05:17 PM)
I know what you mean my last boyfriend treated me horribly and was only interested in sex and I think he broke up with me because I wouldn't sleep with him but I'm still in love with him.

by cuttie (3-15-2005 - 05:56 PM)
i know exactly how u feel i thought i would never gt over my ex and when i met this other guy he showed me a good time and sure enough i did it just takes time

by blurredvisions (3-15-2005 - 09:21 PM)
oh jeez, so familiar.

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