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» Poem: YOU
YOU
written by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl
11:34 AM 3/5/05
Why can't I stop thinking about you?
Why can't I get over you already?
Why do I love you so much?
Sometimes I want to cry
Most of the time I do
Sometimes I want to cut myself
Most of the time I do
Sometimes I want to commit suicide
But I didn't and it is all b/c of you
I think about the promises I made to you
But you didn't keep your promises
That you would never hurt me
Or make me cry unless
They were tears of happiness
What happen to that huh?
So why should I keep mine
I f you couldn't keep yours
It is b/c of you I guess
B/c I don't want to be just like you!!


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Author's footnotes and comments on this Poem:
SAME GUY i always write about .... any comments yea yea i know im obessive just alil

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» Comments / Feedback
by Marigold (3-5-2005 - 03:16 PM)
Thats pretty good.

by gothchick992 (3-6-2005 - 05:27 AM)
this poem rox r u a real goth or a poser e-mail me and let me know gothchick992@yahoo.com

by cuttie (3-15-2005 - 06:03 PM)
that poem was realy good

by blurredvisions (3-15-2005 - 09:18 PM)
whats up with the sterio types? grrrrr...

by gohtic_freak_rock_gurl (3-16-2005 - 09:32 PM)
i know that labels are stupid but ppl kepp calling my punk ar gothic so i say F*** it so im a miture of all type of things

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